@Dusklicious Decimation would have been a far better choice instead of Crush. It helps you carry a lot more, especially when your team is bad at dealing damage. Crush also has a long-ass cooldown since you weren't using any It Waits.

“The Pyre never fades.”
Role: Front Line
4600 Health
350 Movement Speed

[Abilities]

LMB: Blazing Mace (Direct Damage)
Swing your mace every 0.7s, launching a blade of Pyre Magic which deals 400 damage. Enemies and surfaces hit will become marked, and all Souls will move towards marked areas/enemies. 6 ammo. 1.4s reload

RMB: Sacred Seal
Envelop a targeted enemy in an 800 Health Shield, which blocks their attacks. 9s cooldown

Q: Conscript (Direct Damage)
Create a Warrior Soul with 800 Health. While standing still, Souls will hold a 1600 Health Shield in front of them. Every 2.1s, Souls will swing their swords at enemies, launching a projectile which deals 200 damage. Max 4. 11s cooldown

F: Fog of War
Teleport all Souls to your side, and flap your wings to create a cloud of fog, making you and your Souls invisible. The fog lasts until you take another action or 800 damage, and Souls will mirror your movements while it is active. 12s cooldown

E (Ultimate): Inspire
Resummon 4 Warrior Souls. Then, empower your Souls and your allies within 75ft. You gain a 4000 Health Shield, and your Souls and allies gain a 2000 Health Shield. While this Shield is active, it increases movement speed by 25%.

[Talents]

[Default] Convert: Eliminations reset the cooldown of Conscript.
[Level 2] Cleansing Fire: Sacred Seal now Silences the target while active.
[Level 8] Fearless Leader: Hitting an enemy with Blazing Mace increases the Movement Speed of Souls by 30% for 1.5s.

[Loadout Cards]

• W&A
  Monument - Gain {150|150} Health.
  Lionheart - Dropping below 50% max Health grants you a {400|400} Health Shield for 3s. 25s cooldown.
  Tread Down - Eliminations grant {8|8}% increased movement speed for 8s.
  Final Rest - Restore {50|50} Health over 2s when a Soul is destroyed.

• RMB
  Pyre Forged - Activating Sacred Seal grants you a {150|150} Health Shield for 3s.
  Condemn - Increase the Health of Sacred Seal by {100|100}.
  Pyre Shield - Activating Sacred Seal restores {100|100} Health.
  Strike Back - Gain {6|6}% increased movement speed for 2s when Sacred Seal is destroyed.

• Q
  Resistant - Increase the Health of Souls by {100|100}.
  Braced - Increase the Health of Soul's Shields by {150|150}
  Forefront - Gain {2|2}% damage reduction for every Soul within 50ft.
  Garrison - Restore Health equal to {10|10}% of damage dealt by Souls.

• F
  Covert - Increase the Health of Fog of War by {100|100}.
  Bodyguard - Souls gain {10|10}% Damage Reduction while in Fog of War.
  Last-Ditch Effort - Increase your movement speed by {5|5}% while Fog of War is active.
  Sympathy - Activating Fog of War restores {15|15}% of Soul's Health.

Why are there only 4 abilities, and why are they all so dull and uninspired?

@FastHeadcrab said in Character Concept: Zeera, The Soul-Torn:

Why I made this: Among my time playing Paladins, I couldn't help but feel like the characters were identical. Obviously, they all have their unique playstyles and character development, but each class did the same job: "Damage", "Attack from behind", "Stay on the point and protect others", and "Heal".
To me, this removes the customization in playstyles; it isn't really unique, you're just doing the same job by a different method. That is why I created Zeera! She's a support but, while she does heal still, her main feature is her wide range of CC and statuses that she can use to help her team win a major firefight. Her priority is to support by inflicting statuses and such on her opponents rather than healing teammates constantly.
TL;DR - She adds more variety and customization to how a character can fit their class.

Umm, I would disagree with that.

Let's look at just the Supports.

Ying is a very heal-centric Support.
Jenos is a very active fighting Support, and a lot of his Support capabilities comes from his Luminary damage buff.
Mal'Damba is the most well-rounded Support, with a variety of healing methods and CC.
Pip is a Flank-focused Support, with a Slow and Burst heal that means he tries to overwhelm the opponent, rather than outsustain them.
Furia is a Support with a focus on her Damage potential, especially through Wrath passive.

Yes, Supports often fit into the point of "You have the heals", but the way they do it and the other aspects of them are very different.

As for your concept here...

LMB is just a thing. LMBs in general aren't much, unless they have a special passive. This is serviceable.

RMB is a copy of Seris/Io, but slower and with a Shield.

Q is a copy of Tyra's Mark, but more broken.

F is a copy of Grohk's Ghost Walk, but without the benefit of Untargetability.

E isn't really a copy of anything, but it's pretty generic.

Plus, you fall into the trap of not being able to heal and deal damage at the same time, or heal multiple allies at the same time, which really hurts Supports.

With deadly poisons and deep devotion, the Damage Champion Deidre, The Omen is now revealed!
Unfortunately, there's no voice acting in this one. I talked with a friend about a month ago, and she said she could get it done. Obviously, that plan fell through, and I didn't want to wait any more than I already had.

All of these comments about Shirtless Koga, and only one quote comes to my mind.

"I finally rest and watch the sun rise on a grateful universe."

@BaeWulf95 All too easy, Bomb King

"Her 'triggerbot' skill is on a 5s cooldown and it's rather aim assist and not fully aim bot unlike lian"

You misunderstand what a triggerbot is. A triggerbot is a type of hack that fires for you when your crosshair is over an enemy, not an aimbot. Lian's aimbot also only deals 400 damage, not 1000+headshot potential. In fact, it probably takes less skill, since all you have to do is activate Laser Sight and then wildly shake your aim over an enemy to deal damage, don't even have to press the fire button.

"The one and only reason I added later sight is so that she can't be countered by specific champs like evie or get out zoned or pressured by mobile champs easily. "

That's a bad reason. Cavira is a sniper, and as such she's designed to be more susceptible to the high mobility Flanks. Strix is already annoyingly good at dealing with Flanks because of his huge burst, there doesn't need to be another Sniper that punishes Flanks for just existing or doing their job properly.

"I rlly want to iron her balance in the game if she ever were to get added to the game."

She won't be. No Champion Concept is ever going to be added to the game. The best you can hope for is to have a really interesting and unique idea, which might get read and might inspire someone to make something similar. If you're making a Champion Concept because you think it will be added to the game, you're going to be very, very disappointed.

The most important part of a Champion Concept isn't balance, because in all honesty you cannot tell how balanced a Champion will really be until they are played. Rather, the Conceptual part is the most important, as it is a Concept. The exact numbers won't stick with someone and make them think "man, I really like these ideas", it's the actual ideas that will.

Well, it's certainly an interesting concept with some very different ideas. Right now, I don't have a very good grasp on it, though. As it is, it definitely sounds like it would be awkward or clunky to control.

And as for a mobility-based Ultimate, it doesn't seem that useful. You're locked out for a long 1.5s, and you can't get hit by anything during this time, and then your reward is getting to move around well, and trigger an explosion (you never specify the explosion damage or the cooldown it seems to have.)

I believe this was posted on the old forums, am I right?